October 26, 2006

rapid and painless

i saw it coming.
i saw the rain.
i watched the torrents.
the wind drew patterns on the road.
elaborate.
random.
rapid.
levels rising against sidewalks.
with full awareness, i decided to walk.
despite the hole on my right sole.
it took seconds.
the streets became alive.
under gloomy skies.
footsteps.
laughter.
umbrellas.
raincoats.
jokes.
smokes.
gloves.
darker skies.
quick hands.
quicker feet.
eyes see in the dark.
silent.
swift.
painless.
the drop.
head lands first.
blood mingles with streetwater.
creating scarlet pools.
knife?
gone.
before the drop.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nice! Just finished reading everything (upon recommendation). Good stuff. Looking foward for more.

[rainchild] said...

thanx. glad you like it. i'm thinking of putting a couch in here. whaddaya think?

Querido said...

and we'll all Coffee With Burgundy! :þ

yin's a satelite. when she likes a reading source, she'll telecast it to everyone and soon you'll REALLY be needing a couch here :þ